Date: 30/07/09 - 12:15 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
..........That was scarring. Especialy the pedo element, but i tried to overlook that by imagining rin as a woman instead. But it was really well written. Especialy the emotional turmoil and descriptions from Sesshis pov.
Date: 03/06/09 - 05:50 pm Title: Give and Take
i like this it is different and i like some of the stories where rin is young but i have to say in my opinion this is the best one i have read so far great job
[Report This]Date: 25/11/08 - 11:45 am Title: Intimate Animosity
I am blushing.
Date: 08/10/08 - 08:14 pm Title: Intimate Animosity
wow talk about whips n chains i really LOVED this one update soon
Date: 08/10/08 - 05:45 pm Title: Intimate Animosity
You have to continue this. Even if it's just an unfinished thing. I don't care... I need MOAR NAZI SEX. I will give you your very own e-baby carried by me. Eh? Come on...
Date: 08/10/08 - 09:11 am Title: Intimate Animosity
Very interestng... and rather delicious!
[Report This]Date: 27/03/08 - 10:10 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
Uuummmmm . . . O_O
Uuummmmm . . . That made me uncomfortable, but I liked it. It really spoke to me.
Date: 26/02/08 - 10:19 am Title: Give and Take
wow i remember when i first read this story i was like that was a good ass story and im still saying the same thing update soon though i would like to read more ... i do have one question is this taking place a few weeks later or as years pass??
Author's Response: Give and Take is an independant story from the first chapter. None of these will be sequencial, and are each a stand alone. I'm glad you liked the story. ^^
Date: 19/02/08 - 04:53 pm Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
I read this story a long time ago and never reviewed it, for some reason. THIS story is the reason I started writing fan-fic.
Just thought I would share that.
Date: 25/01/08 - 07:50 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
I love this story i sincerely believe that sessy would never willing hurt rin for no aparrent reason considering she's the only to really stand by him,besides jaken and ah-un.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/07 - 08:32 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
You have a really vivid mind. I like you!!! This story hurt, but it was a good hurt.
Date: 28/10/07 - 03:28 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
This was really well written, and not at all occ so that was the best part- as well as Sesshomaru admitted he loved Rin ^ ^Great job!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/07 - 09:53 pm Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
amazing job, with a lot of realism
Date: 17/09/07 - 04:42 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
I wish to recant my earlier remark.
I have spent my ENTIRE weekend reading and re reading this piece. It is tastefully written and tactfully done. It sparked my imagination to the point wehre I could envision the act itself. Americans tend to forget that during Feudal times, girls married at a very young age. There is nothing wrong with what has happened. Nothing dirty. There are just two beings fulfilling each other on so many levels that for me to touch on them all would take pages.
I thank you for this piece and laude you for you rcreativity and eloquence of word. Should you ever dein to write a book, I will be a devoted follower of your craft.
Date: 16/09/07 - 03:27 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
Of course I'm considering the age factor here - tho not quite specified. but other than that, its a fine story!
Kudos!
Date: 10/09/07 - 03:00 am Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
It's major hawt. xD
But the part were you wrote 'he bids her to crawl into his lap' made me laugh and shout out "PEDO!" in spite of myself. It means that I just lost a bet... D:
[Report This]Date: 02/09/07 - 12:27 pm Title: Moon Dark, Star Bright
Nice story. I think that you did wonderful.
